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I wanted to grab you, I wanted to throw you against a wall and kiss you.
I wanted to thrust my leg inbetween yours, feel you quiver with desire.
I wanted to feel your hands groping at my arms, your fingernails digging into my skin.
I wanted your hot breath to carry whispers of surrender, of submission.
I wanted you, needed to make you mine.

But even if I had, you wouldn't have been mine.
You would have faded.
In the same way you did in the end.

One night I felt you leave me.
Slowly. Silently.
I didn't hold you back.
I let you go.
I knew it was time.

You didn't linger, though your scent did.
My memories of you did.
A piece of your soul did.

Should we meet again, we'll both revive.
Though parted we'll revive as one, stonger than anything ever before.

One night I felt you leave me.
Slowly. Silently.
I didn't hold you back.
I let you go.
I knew it was time.

I knew we would meet again someday.
It's a real- life experience I've made, disguised as a scenario of lust, love and saying goodbye.

I think it can actually be interpreted in many various ways;
A loved one leaving the human world through death, maybe.
Or the splitting up of two people sharing a bond stronger than love.
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designed-devil Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2009  Professional Filmographer
I'm jelous of women for only they can write like this. :)


peace, love an happiness to you!
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Woundless Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2009
Thank you so much :)

But there's also great male poets *cough* shakespeare *cough*
;)

peace, love and happiness to you too =)
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designed-devil Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2009  Professional Filmographer
of course there are...
but there's somethin in poetry like yours that even he cannot capture.
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Woundless Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009
Awh, that sounds so sweet :)
thank you (:
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designed-devil Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009  Professional Filmographer
:D :heart: :hug:
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Woundless Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
:)
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designed-devil Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009  Professional Filmographer
:)
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